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[[ OOC, Critique tiemz~ ]]

Okay, so...yeah.  Critique time.  I figure I should probably check in with characters make sure nothing's going terribly wrong before I totally screw something up.  I am, after all, fairly new to RP...

voiceofserenity  - Kaylee, from the series Firefly

SO.  I want it all.  I can handle it.  The good, the bad, the ugly.  Pour it on out.  Is Kaylee IC?  Are my logs comprehensible?  Hell, do I try too hard?

I've been acting for most of my life.  I can handle critique like nobody's bizniz.

And, as all opinions are valued, thank you guys for doing this for me.  It keeps me in check.

Trans_9 - Medical Records

Medical chart for trans_9






PATIENT MEDICAL HISTORY
Name: Kaywinnit Lee Frye Age: 20 Sex: Female Height: 5'6" Weight: 130 lbs
[ ] Magical by nature/practices magic. [ ] Can't have magic used on. [ ] Contageous (see notes).
Human
Average Lifespan: 90 years Rate of Maturity: 18-23 years Average age of Puberty: 10-14 years
Normal Diet: Protein, grains, some fruits and vegetables.

Common Ailments: Common human disease or illnesses.

Specific Notes: N/A
GENERAL HEALTH
All of the following sense-related questions are to be answered in comparison to an average Homo sapiens. Ask your medical provider for assistance in answering this section.
Vision: [X] Fine | [ ] Near Sighted | [ ] Far Sighted | [ ] Enhanced Blood Pressure: [X] Average | [ ] Low | [ ] High
If Enhanced, further explain: N/A
Hearing: [ ] Deaf | [ ] Low | [X] Average | [ ] High Range | [ ] Low Range | [ ] Extremely Sensitive
If necessary, further explain:  N/A
Smell: [ ] Cannot Smell | [ ] Low | [X] Average | [ ] High | [ ] Extremely Sensitive
If Extremely Sensitive, further explain:  N/A
Known Allergies: None

Are there any potential complications with healing processes we should be aware of when treating you?: No

Do you have a healing factor different from the average for your species? If so, explain how here: No

Have you recently been screened for species, sex, and age specific cancer risks?: Yes.

Special notes on care: None

Record of Past Injuries: Bullet wound to the stomach, minor burns and scars on the arms and hands (work-related)

Ship Health Records: Bullet wound to the upper left arm, bruised ribs (left side), moderate burns on hands and arms, rage virus, age regression
SEXUAL HEALTH
Date of Last Menses/Estrus/Equiv (skip if n/a): Two weeks ago.

Have you ever been sexually active?: Yes.

Are you currently Sexually Active: Yes.

Have you recently been screened for STIs?: Yes.

Species specific sexually related health notes and/or issues: None
DRUGS AND MEDICATION
Are you or should you be on any prescribed medication? If so, list below: N/A

Have you taken any recreational or non-prescribed drugs or substances in the past? Is so, please list them and their frequency of use below: Alcohol, two to three times a week

Do you currently take any recreational or non-prescribed drugs or substances? Is so, please list them and their frequency of use below: N/A

[ Trans_9 - Omnicom Profile ]

Kaylee Frye

Age: 20
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Homeworld: Kowlonshi, 2517 A.D.
Title/Rank: Head of the Engineering Subdivision Mechanics and Repair, Co-Head of the Welcoming Committee
Organizations: Engineering, Welcoming Committee
Residence: Serenity, Hangar
Additional Information:
Senior Staff member of Engineering, employee of the Drunken Dragon Tavern in the city, general Cheer of the Ship staff. Questions about the ship and requests for cheering up are both acceptable.


OOC Information

Mun: Cheryle
Violations: 0
Application/Wiki Page: Here

Character Profile

[OOC Information]
Name: Cheryle
Age 22
AIM / E-mail / LiveJournal: chkittie / RedHeadFanFreak@hotmail.com / blue_sweetheart


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002: Good news!

Good news, ya'll!  Wash 'n I got to workin', and we figured some radios that'll work across the island, and won't need too much chargin', so we'll be able to talk without havin' a whole bunch of electricity problems.  On the downside, we only got three built, but I figure it's a start!

Anyone know where I can find another Radio Shack?

Hope everyone's doin' well and stockin' up for the cold!  If you need help and I'm not busy, I'm always lookin' for somethin' to do.  Sometimes these guys get a mite yu ben de...

Keep safe!

001

Seems to me a lot of ya'll are needin' some cheerin' up.  I hope this party'll do it, or we'll hafta think of somethin'.

As the Cap'n said, we're lookin' for some of our friends, and this, "They didn't make it" gou shi really isn't gonna cut it with me.  Ya'll are too negative for your own good, I think.